close reading bingo

Weaknesses:
number 6 - verb "use"
The diction within this passage uses a precise, with intermediate writing literal and direct.
http://alix2278.blogspot.com/2011/10/practice-diction-analysis.html

number 8 - punctuation goes inside quotation marks
Salinger first describes the parents as “touchy as hell”.
http://letsgetawesome5.blogspot.com/2011/10/practice-diction-analysis.html

number 1 - "he says" quote
Even when speaking of his brother, Holden says where D.B. lives “isn’t too far from this crumby place.”
http://freefifteen.blogspot.com/2011/10/practice-diction-analysis.html

number 2 - long quote
Then the teen bounces around topics from an autobiographical style to the purpose of his writing to randomness about his brother, “D.B” who’s “in Hollywood without describing them very well. That isn’t too far from [the narrator’s] crumby place.”
http://ariadna-permelia.blogspot.com/2011/10/confused-practice-diction-analysis.html


Best responses:
http://mbutchko.blogspot.com/2011/10/practice-diction-analysis.html
http://charliebucket15.blogspot.com/2011/10/practice-diction-analysis.html


Both responses sound educated and do not have weaknesses.